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Was I crazy to think
That I could have
Every part of you?

Wishing to be in your arms
That'd your heart beat for me
And I'd be the one you'd lay your eyes on

Yes
I was always insane
Loosing my grip
Changing slowly everyday

Where has my sanity wandered off to?
Because
I know for a fact
I can't have you without it.

This lifetime search
For something so trivial
Has ruined it all for me

I have wasted the years
Shedding the tears
All because you never wanted me
Um, I'm feeling a little heartbroken. ;o Lol, it's weird.
The art does not belong to me, only the poem.
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:iconwritteninraw:
WrittenInRaw Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Student Writer
<3
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:iconthe14thmusician:
The14thMusician Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Pretty... But it's okay to feel sad, we all feel the same way at one point. I wrote one too. Come and comment some time.
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Nekothebro Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is terribly sad, my friend
:cutecryplz:
But this poem is excellent, friend.
Cheer up~:heart:
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bryce1023 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
do you write tour own true feelings when you write or are you composing someone else's feelings from your own perspectives? just wondering lol its beautiful though!
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Arcturius-the-Vile Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Yeh I'm in the middle of that sort of predicament.
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KuraikoSaito Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
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blackshootingstar97 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
love it
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:iconal3xdk:
Al3xDk Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Been there, done that :c
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:iconbenmaynardofmanyarts:
Been there
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:iconchibipunchies:
Chibipunchies Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Photographer
I know how you feel. My boyfriend dumped me. Now he won't talk, look, or smile at me.
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AnimewolfRPC Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My sanity already wandered off :D //shot, stabbed, thrown off a cliff, and eaten by shark

Sorry, This was touching :) Here, have a cookie~ ;D

̶ᶤ̶̶ ̶̶ʷ̶̶ᵃ̶̶ˢ̶̶ ̶̶ˢ̶̶ᵉ̶̶ʳ̶̶ᶤ̶̶ᵒ̶̶ᵘ̶̶ˢ̶̶ ̶̶ᵗ̶̶ʰ̶̶ᵒ̶̶ᵘ̶̶ᵍ̶̶ʰ̶
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:icontheladyjaegerjaques:
TheLadyJaegerjaques Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
::nods:: Lol, eaten by a shark? xD
:O Cookie?! Nom nom nom. cx
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:iconanimewolfrpc:
AnimewolfRPC Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lawlz, yup a shark. XD
--Pulls hand back when you nearly eat my hand-- o^o Holy shit, dude.
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TheLadyJaegerjaques Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Luv them cookies. >:3
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:iconanimewolfrpc:
AnimewolfRPC Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yup. Cookies yum-yum. >:3
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An-UnTouchable-Smile Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is so beautiful, I can relate, you are wonderful at swaying emotions with words.
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:icontheladyjaegerjaques:
TheLadyJaegerjaques Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
<3 Thank you so much. >o<
Comments like yours really make me happy. c:
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An-UnTouchable-Smile Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I am very glad :meow:
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Chamira Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
:<
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:iconfrosii:
Frosii Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist
wow... this picture says more than words <3
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:iconbits-o-mint:
bits-o-mint Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
This is really nice... I'm sorry you're feeling sad, though!
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:iconsazima:
sazima Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
this is beautiful
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:iconngrizzy:
NGrizzy Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG you soooo know me!!! story of my life for reals!! What a lovely poem!!! :clap: Truly touching :)
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Russias-Maid Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
OH My Gosh! I feel the same right now! :(
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The-RemnantJuice Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
Aww :heart:
Care to vent?
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sepulcher911 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
i know im a guy, but this poetry is amazing.
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:iconcrezpy123:
crezpy123 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice emotion
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impervious9 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your Characters seem to be based off Hyouka... and the poem's quite admirable...
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Stickmen-Evolved Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You can't be 'loosing your grip'; you can 'loosen' your grip, but in this instance I think you meant losing. Please, for the good of the English language, get the damn spelling right. Just like in the poem this may be 'trivial', but for a poem to appear on the front page of dA and have a spelling error it's just kinda sad.

You seem to have so much advice and helpful comments concerning the emotional nature of the poem but I thought I'd lend a more practical hand. o,o
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mothepro Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:icondragonhugplz: i hope you get better *enternal hugs of love*<3<3<3
{even though you don't know me, please, i hope you get all better and everything}

With lots of love-
Timmy
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TheLadyJaegerjaques Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
>o< Omg. Thank you sooo much. <3
You;re so sweet. thanks for reading the poem. c:
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mothepro Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Ahahaha ooh you are so very welcome!!
Please keep it up!!!!!!! 8D I look forward to more ;)

Ahaha awww shucks, thank you *incredibly touched* Thanks for your kind words!!! :3
And, you are truly welcome! :icondragonhugplz:
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nikissu Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
Very touching
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:iconkisaaoi:
KisaAoi Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
Pretty much me right now :\
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cookiekeras Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I like it. It's exactly how I feel too.
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asran089 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
excelent work ^^
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cddmanful Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I came across this on the front page (as I have it, "popular 24 hrs") and found it compelling--it seems to, for me, illustrate how wrongheaded some of us (including me) are in our quest for love....yet I think that the speaker is right in saying that "I know for a fact / I can't have you without it" but wrong in saying its "something so trivial" and "wast[ing] the years..."-sry long comment....
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ana21410 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
Awww.. things will get better!
Nice poem and art
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Gonzalez012997 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Am am very sorry that you are feeling this way. I really do like this piece though. You are a great artist, I hope that this cheers you up a little.
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LovelySpecter Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, that poem was so sad, but it was nice at the same time because it's nice to know I'm not the only one who has felt that way. ^^
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Zhiedhan17 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student Interface Designer
so sweet.
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Fyre-Strike Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Crazy? Nah, just truely human. (Sorry you feel like this.) I love how, in some way, shape, or form, all of us have experienced this, it's a really good poem.
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Saccstry Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
This isn't Photobucket :P
Use your own art.
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Penguin-Freak1 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
she's just using it for a preview picture, the poem is owned by her.
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Saccstry Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
You can't use art that isn't yours, even if it's just for a 'preview picture'. You don't HAVE to have a preview picture for literature, you know.
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Penguin-Freak1 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah sorry I had to look at dA's guidelines, your right.

Preview images which were created using your own resources and your own efforts are most appropriate for use; you should not simply 'take' images which belong to other creative people without first getting their permission. Otherwise all preview images must abide by the deviantART terms of service as well as all other relevant policies.
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HBPen Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful
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jessywave369 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
nice poem
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SorrowBNK Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
I know exactly how this feels. It's a feeling that crushes you from the inside out. I'm with ya on this one...
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oromis4591 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
quite good
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