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I've been everywhere
I've seen everything
I don't want to see it again.

Bad things happened.
As they should,
but you see
these things didn't make me feel good.
They were like thousands of knives,
poking at my skin
Wanting desperately to break in.
I screamed
I have taken him away,
His life and heavenly soul.
Would it matter
If I didn't regret a thing?
I'd be a murderer and a thief
Since the day I was born
Sprouting was the ground knotted and twisted
My limbs creak with pain
My heart beats with anger
Of these things I've done
Because darling, as you can see
I am not real
I never want to be
I'd regret the moments that I would see
You don't enjoy life so much
When you realize you're not loved.
Aww thanks guys. I won't take it off. xD Your strong persuading skills saved this poem. c:
The Art does no belong to me.
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SaberBasir Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
Just wonderful!
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:icontheladyjaegerjaques:
TheLadyJaegerjaques Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! <3
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ZEB31 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Such a deep poem. I love poetry. I try my hand at poetry but I was never really good at it.
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:icontheladyjaegerjaques:
TheLadyJaegerjaques Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I've always felt that way. Poetry wasn't always my favorite. :P
Don't give up young grasshopper. >:3
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ZEB31 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconbowplz:
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MeghansDreamDesigns Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Student Artist
Beautiful :D
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:iconproudemofreak:
proudemofreak Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
this is very beautiful and meaningful, well done.
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darkfighter2008 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So beautiful
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:icontheladyjaegerjaques:
TheLadyJaegerjaques Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:3 Thank you soooo much.
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:icondarkfighter2008:
darkfighter2008 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome
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:icontesswild:
TessWild Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
amazingly written
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:iconhoneydewsweetie:
honeydewsweetie Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
this is so beautiful......
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:icontheladyjaegerjaques:
TheLadyJaegerjaques Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awwy. <3 Thank you. c:
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:iconshei99:
Shei99 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
Wow~ touching poem T^T
Btw I like how you used that pic. It's a fanart of a song from AKB48 and even tho I don't like ballads, it's a teally beautiful song and was in my head when I read the poem lol

[link]
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:icontheladyjaegerjaques:
TheLadyJaegerjaques Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:3 Thankies. :3 Oh, first time I've heart that. ::clicks the link:: >:3
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Shei99 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
I'm a fan so I recognize the outfit ^^
The artist seem to like girl groups too
The song is from AKB48, biggest group, literally and figuratively, in Japan right now. They have fans with kids, male, girls, and even grandmas. They top alot of charts and even karaoke charts and can do cute stuffs or even hardcore things like this. lol [link]
They even have a song, Sugar Rush,in Disney Wreck it Ralph movie too
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YangZH Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
So sad, but well done even it isn't from you
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:icontheladyjaegerjaques:
TheLadyJaegerjaques Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your comment confused me. xD
The picture isn't mine but the poem is. Completely original.
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:iconyangzh:
YangZH Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
Hahaha im sorry
I meant the picture
But the poem is nice and it touched me
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:icontheladyjaegerjaques:
TheLadyJaegerjaques Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, okay. xD Thank you, btw,
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:iconslenderman7:
slenderman7 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
I fell the same way all the time.
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:iconclarkx:
clarkx Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
so do I
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:iconkristopheb96:
KristopheB96 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Damn... that's deep...
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:icontheladyjaegerjaques:
TheLadyJaegerjaques Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, I try.
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AmiNozomi Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
oh
i favorited this for the picture
did you draw it?
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:icontheladyjaegerjaques:
TheLadyJaegerjaques Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I have a feeling a lot of people did.
Sorry, no I didn't. :T
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AmiNozomi Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:T
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:icondripz2012:
dripz2012 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice
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xsebby-chu93 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
love this.. .<3 it reminds me of the song Leia from Vocaloid so much>w<
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kiyokimaus Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;A;
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NekoNekoGirl04 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a very beautiful poem. Very nice job with this. :meow:
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:icontheladyjaegerjaques:
TheLadyJaegerjaques Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. <3
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NekoNekoGirl04 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! ^^
:icongrin--plz:
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snsg2305 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
wow i love drawing, i love poem(?)
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BootlessSquare Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
wow... i am speechless... i find i feel this way recently these past few months, but anyway, amazing work!
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:icontheladyjaegerjaques:
TheLadyJaegerjaques Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I am glad I could get such a good reaction form you. c:
Thank you so much darling. <3
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AllartMaker Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
I love the picture you know the artist who drew it?
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:iconstar-wars123:
star-wars123 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
to me it kind of looks like something by hanokage.
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:icontheladyjaegerjaques:
TheLadyJaegerjaques Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I wish I did.
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falling-like-rain Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely
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:icontheladyjaegerjaques:
TheLadyJaegerjaques Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, darling.
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falling-like-rain Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank YOU :)
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chocoleesy Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh my I just love this so. The imagery and the feelings are glorious.
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:icontheladyjaegerjaques:
TheLadyJaegerjaques Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love your comment. <3 Thank you.
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:iconchocoleesy:
chocoleesy Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you deserve it. You're welcome.
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PaintIngMANiAC Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
Please don't take this off D: it's really good, deep too
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:icontheladyjaegerjaques:
TheLadyJaegerjaques Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I promise not too now. Thank you so much.
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PaintIngMANiAC Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
^_^ you're welcome~
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UptownDavontae Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
not bad though
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Twee-chan16 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student Artist
Wow! What an amazing poem.. and illustration also!
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